Kia ora! My name is Alexis, I go to Papakura Central School. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Miss Johnson. In my family there are my 2 brothers, me,my mum and dad. My favourite food is Mcdonalds chips, my favourite movie is none and in my spare time I like to draw. I think I am good at drawing and I love learning about fixing up my writing . My goal for this year is to try and concentrate more on my work.
We were writing about Cinderella and Step Mother. We are trying to convince some people to see who they believe. Who do you believe Cinderella or the believe Cinderella or lady Tremaine? Would you like to try?
Wow! Alexis this is such a great first person narrative. I really like how you have spoken as if you were Cinderella. You sound very believable.
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